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Post by humanyarnknot on Jul 28, 2016 12:28:38 GMT -6
this was probably going to more to this actually i think i picked upin the middle of my idea and ran and stopped and forgot. gods know i can't remember what it was supposed to mean. despite that, i like this.
"to rest"
Oh, and how i love this sinking feeling between where day and night were healing
and pain
she came too to recall and reveal that day and night could heal but that craggled canyons and forest fires
never quite leave
it does not mean that the sun should sleep forever
nor should the moon swim til the sea stops calling
but only that there is a line of night and day and you may find there sleep no, rest
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Post by Invisimort on Jul 28, 2016 12:46:03 GMT -6
u should format that on a piece of paper and get some succulents and post images of it on tumblr all arthouse aesthetic like tbh bruv also like with some rain and somebody in a large hoodie looking picturesquely out a window ur tone is spot on
if u choose to continue i would maybe think about ur symbolic duality of day and night and like idk emphasize it more or illuminate that metaphor more cause like i like it but idk what to make of it what is broken about our heliocentric model dark yarnknot tell me
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Post by Unpredictabloo on Jul 28, 2016 13:05:48 GMT -6
I am not good at poetry but i am glad you're here
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blanketsandeggs
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being addicted to a certain kind of sadness
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Post by blanketsandeggs on Aug 8, 2016 9:38:28 GMT -6
who is she
is she pain
am i projecting on ur art
sorry
thank you
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